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【從發散的「中翻英寫作」變成「英文學術寫作」的重要關鍵】

學術寫作要怎樣學得好，可以從好多面向來加強。不管是「學術涵養」、「對該學科理解的深度」、「對文獻的理解、整理方法」、「邏輯」、「對學術出版文化的理解」、「思維清晰度」、「英文能力 (文法、字彙)」、還是「寫作 (段落、篇章掌握、修辭)」 等等的能力。

今天這篇文章以「結構性語塊」的角度來淺談如何 “write like a Harvard professor”。

▍學術寫作當中，充滿著很多的結構性語塊，是不分領域都會使用的。師範大學翻譯所廖伯森教授就曾經說，這些學術結構性語塊的使用，可以讓學術的溝通更有效率 。

下面有 5 組學生的實際寫作例子，讓大家感覺看看，學好這些結構性語塊，可以如何幫助我們聽起來 IQ 爆棚（笑)

學生 1️⃣：We gotta carefully interpret these data because…
調整版：These data must be interpreted with caution in that…

學生 2️⃣：X and Y are totally different in many ways.
調整版：X differs from Y in a number of aspects.

學生 3️⃣：More and more people are getting interested in XXX.
調整版：There has been an increasing interest in XXX.

學生 4️⃣：A lot of people criticized Smith’s meta-analysis.
調整版：Smith’s meta-analysis has been subject to considerable criticism.

▍使用結構性語塊還有一個好處，就是可以「侷限」住我們的表達內容。為什麼會說是好處呢？如果不了解學術文化，有些內容或想法表達可能會不太適當。我們來看看學生 5 的例子。

學生 5️⃣：Although the method is safe and effective, it is not perfect.
調整版：Despite its safety and efficacy, the method suffers from some limitations.

學生不見得能從「不完美」轉換成思維「有缺點、有限制」，但因為結構性語塊，我們可以「制約」一些相較不符合學術寫作特色的文字。

為了因應眾多學生的要求，我在 3/21 (日) 加開了一場「英語學術寫作」的免費公開課。不管是現任研究生、即將要變成研究生、工作上會用到學術寫作、或是對加強學術寫作能力有需求的你，都歡迎來聽聽！

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【有關司法機構被官營媒體攻擊的聲明】

《人民日報》於2020年12月27日發表一篇抨擊香港法院在一宗涉及知名人士的案件中批准被告人保釋的評論文章，而文章發表的時候該獲准保釋的決定已進入上訴程序，我們就此表示嚴重關注。文章攻擊法院的判決，並形容《蘋果日報》創辦人黎智英「惡名昭彰，極度危險」，以及是「亂港禍首」。該報斷言在黎智英案中，不准保釋須是前設的常規，並要求司法機構「作出正確選擇」。文章又認為已經有足夠證據顯示黎智英已觸犯國安法第55條，該條訂明某些案件可以移交中國大陸審訊。當上訴委員會將於2020年12月31日就政府申請上訴許可召開聆訊，由國家政權控制和營運的報章刊登該篇評論文章，令人尤其擔心及被視為是試圖干預我們獨立的司法機關的程序公義。

作為致力守護長久以來珍而重之的法治和司法獨立的法律執業者，我們認為有責任提出以下關注，並以個人名義僅此聲明：

1、 官營媒體對司法機關毫無基礎的攻擊應當停止

在數位親建制人士及官方控制和營運的媒體 － 包括《文匯報》及《大公報》－ 要求「司法改革」及嘲諷「黃官」的日益壓力下，出現上述評論文章，我們深表憂慮。我們注意到司法機構自今年9月以來，已就對其日趨激烈的攻擊發表了四份聲明。

誠然，公眾有權討論及評論法院的裁決及其根據的事實及法律，惟討論不應流於憑空論斷、政治抹黑，或企圖向法院就某些案件的裁決施加壓力，否則公眾對司法機構的聲譽、專業和獨立勢必受到嚴重破壞。特別是《人民日報》刊登的評論文章，會被視為明顯地向法院將要審理的案件施加壓力，此舉可以是違反審理中的案件不應評論的原則，以及有損公平審訊。這些攻擊應當立即停止。

我們亦呼籲律政司採取行動，維護司法機構免受官方控制或營運的媒體作出毫無基礎和不實指控。正如高浩文法官在其判詞中指出，「在普通法司法管轄區，例如香港，傳統上法官和司法機構是不會公開地就針對其裁決和個人而作出的不公平和不適當的批評為自己辯護，而傳統上負責律政的官員則有責任反駁錯誤的指控，以維護司法機構和個別法官。」

2、 公平審訊及無罪假定

不論如何解讀，香港特區政府有法律責任保護每一位香港居民的基本權利不受侵犯，包括公平審訊的權利。我們質疑一旦涉嫌觸犯國安法第55條下，該等權利是否仍然受到保障。理由有兩方面：第一，我們質疑中國大陸在刑事審訊的程序中，對公平審訊是否有足夠的保障，那是由於中國尚未落實《公民與政治權利國際公約》，這亦是長久以來為人詬病。第二，12名香港居民於2020年12月28日在深圳鹽田法院受審的案件，沒有公開審訊，他們亦沒有權選擇他們委託的法律代表，令人質疑香港特區政府有否履行其法律責任。

上述關注，反映國安法無法為被告人提供足夠的基本人權保障，並在法律上存在很多不確定性。正如英國最高法院院長賓漢（Lord Bingham）在其著作《The Rule of Law》中說明，法治的核心是在一個地方裡，所有不論屬公共或私人的個人和機構，都必須受法律的約束及保障，而法律必須是公開和預先頒佈，以及由法院公開執行。因此，我們促請有關當局嚴格遵守法治原則，自我約束，以及謹慎運用國安法賦予的權力。

帝理邁
林洋鋐
彭皓昕
蔡頴德
黃耀初

2020年12月30日


【Statement on Continuous Attacks on the Judiciary and
Art. 55 of the National Security Law】

We note with grave concern that on 27 December 2020, l the People’s Daily published anr editorial piece criticizing a decision in respect of a bail application that is currently subject to an ongoing appeal. In attacking the judicial decisions in Apple Daily founder, Mr Jimmy Lai Chee-yin’s case, the People’s Daily has labelled him as a “notorious and extremely dangerous” and an “insurgent”. It added that the presumption against bail should be the norm in cases such as Lai’s and urged the judiciary to “make the right decision”. The commentary further claimed that there were sufficient grounds in Mr Lai’s case for invoking Article 55 of the National Security Law (NSL) - which allows certain cases to be transferred to Mainland China for trial. This type of commentary appearing in a newspaper run/controlled by the Central Government, when the Appeals Committee would soon be hearing the Hong Kong Government’s application for leave to appeal on 31 December 2020, is particularly worrying and borders on an attempt to interfere with the due administration of justice by Hong Kong’s independent judiciary.

We, the undersigned, in our personal capacity and as lawyers committed to safeguarding the Rule of Law and the independence of judiciary, we feel duty bound to draw attention to the following matters:

(1) Unfounded attacks against the judiciary by state-run/controlled media should cease

The above-mentioned commentary was made amid intensifying calls for “judicial reform” and deriding “yellow judges” from various pro-establishment figures and state-run/controlled media, including Wen Wei Po and Tai Kung Po. To that end, we note that the judiciary has had to issue a total of four statements since September this year, in light of the intensifying attacks mounted against it.

Whilst members of the public have the right to discuss and comment on court rulings for reasons grounded on fact or law, such discussion should not cross into bare assertions, imputations of political bias, or attempts to put pressure on the Judiciary to decide specific cases in a particular manner. Otherwise, public confidence in the integrity, professionalism and independence of the judiciary would be seriously undermined. Notably, the commentary published by People’s Daily, could be perceived as putting pressure on the judiciary to decide a pending case in a particular manner, which breaches the sub judice rule and could prejudice the accused’s right to a fair trial. These attacks should cease immediately.

We also call on the Secretary of Justice to take action to defend the Judiciary against unwarranted accusations led by state-run/controlled media. As Judge Russell Coleman noted in his judgment, “it has been the traditional view that Judges and the Judiciary do not speak out in defence of their decisions or to defend themselves against unfair and inappropriate criticism [...] in common law jurisdictions like Hong Kong, it was the tradition that the minister responsible for the administration of justice has the duty of defending the Judiciary or individual Judges against wrong accusations”.

(2) Concerns about fair trial and presumption of innocence

The Hong Kong Government has the legal obligation to protect any Hong Kong residents, whose rendition is sought, from violation of his/her fundamental and non-derogable rights, including the right to fair trial. We question whether such rights can be guaranteed upon invoking of Article 55 of the NSL. The reason is two-folded. First, we question whether China has adequate protection on the right to fair trial during the criminal process, as mainland China has not ratified the International Convention on Civil and Political Rights (ICCPR) and has been long criticised on such. Second, the fact that the 12 Hong Kong residents who stood trial at Shenzhen Yantian People’s Court on 28 December 2020 were denied the right to open trial and the right to appoint lawyers of their choice, casts considerable doubt on whether the Hong Kong Government can fulfil its legal obligation.

These concerns reflect that the NSL lacks adequate protections to safeguard an accused’s fundamental human rights and lacks legal certainty. As Lord Bingham wrote in his book, The Rule of Law, at the core of the rule of law is the notion “that all persons and authorities within the state, whether public or private, should be bound by and entitled to the benefit of laws publicly and prospectively promulgated and publicly administered in the courts”. Accordingly, we urge the authorities to uphold strict adherence to the rule of law and exercise restraint and caution in invoking its power under the NSL.
Mark Daly
Michelle Tsoi Wing Tak
Kenneth Lam
Davyd Wong
Janet Pang Ho Yan

Dated this 30 December 2020

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許多人的一生中曾經面臨或正在面臨一次或是多次的憂鬱症,不論是因為感情，工作，自信的喪失或者對死亡的恐懼...
憂鬱症是一個非常私人的話題,但我們不應該害怕去跟身邊有這樣困擾的朋友們分享跟討論這個敏感的話題，反而勇敢的說出來,分享是治療的第一步！
今天是我第一次跟媽媽聊這個話題，請她跟我分享她的感受。多年與憂鬱症並肩作戰的她，我希望可以感受她的痛跟經歷，也希望今天的這個分享可以幫助到需要幫助的人找到你們的答案。
我非常的感激媽媽願意接受我這個請求，敞開心房跟我們聊聊她內心深處那敏感的世界，如果以下的訪談讓你有不好的觀感，我希望各位可以尊重媽媽的感受，給予她正面的鼓勵跟支持。
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Depression is a feeling many of us are dealing once or more during our lifetime. Maybe because of our relationship, our work, our lack of confidence or because of some fears such as death... Depression is a very personal subject, however we should not be afraid to share it with those who surround us. Indeed, sharing is the first step to healing.
Today, for the first time I'm asking my mum to share about her feelings. Living with depression for few years, I want to understand more her pain and hope this conversation may help some looking for answers.
I am thankful she accepted to open up herself with us and I ask you, please, to be respectful in any of your comments.
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用24小時學流利的印度話| 揭露學習15大方法 (用$20請騙子補習老師)

挑戰24小時學流利的印度話 (請了騙子老師!!!)

挑戰24小時學一個新語言 (請了騙子老師!!!)

我挑戰24小時內學會印度話!!! (請了騙子老師)

我24小時內學會印度話!!! (請了騙子老師)

BB仔時發出ee oo聲, 原來是世界各地各種語言.



長大後我們母語才因為環境因素而慢慢會建立.

所以其實小時候的我們已經是精通所有語言的天才bb!


有報導指2024年印度將會成為全球最多人口的國家. 而我住的城市一向都是很多印度人的.

所以我要學印度話, 我覺得對於我4年後的將來也會好有幫助.

今次評價成功的準則就是24小時後, 到我小時候常常去吃飯的印度餐廳用印度話order到一餐. 而要他們以為我真的是印度人.

Day 1

(學習口音)

Ok, 我們的口音學到了一點點. 但學一種新語言, 最重要的根基還是學基本詞匯

Su=shoe

Police=polise

Hindi (印地話) 是印度語言裡面最出名的. 相信也是最簡單. 30分鐘應該就可以. (Show learn Hindi in 30 minutes)

NamasTe=你好

Meraa naam= 我的名字是

hai= 存在

aap se milkar khushi hui= 很高興認識你

DHanyavaaD= 謝謝

bahuT= 很多

svaagat hai= 不用客氣

Phir milenge= 再見

haan= 是

thodi bahut= 一點點

因為印度跟香港一樣曾有一段很長的時間是英國籍民地.


Hindi本身分開兩種說話方式

如果要跟一些印度本地居民用言語溝通, 可以用 ‘Urdu’ 即是比較俚語一點的. 正式一點的埸合就需要用sanskrit, 書面語.

這個知識好重要, 因為之後叫東西吃幾多個份量一定要講清楚.


但我覺得在此學生字這些不能確定自己能100%完成到叫外賣這個任務. 所以我決定網上聘請一個私人美女導師幫一幫手.



我就去睡一睡先.



發現印度語跟中文很相似的地方是喜歡用portmanteau. 即是將兩個字合為一個全新的意思.

像印度話?面 ‘phir milenge’ 是再見的意思. 第一個Phir的意思是 ‘再一次’ 而milenge是 ‘我們會見面.

再一次, 我們會見面.



每一個語言字和意思的結構都是不同

Hindi一個句子的結構是 (subject) (object) (verb) 名詞/形容詞...




I want to make a food order

Main, ek khaana ordar karana chaahata hoon

(I). 1 Food order). (I want to one)



我就想叫這個Tandoori Lamb champ,



Main tandoree memne chaimpiyan ordar karana chaahata hoon



大家可以看到比之前只是要 ‘food order’ 少了 “ek” 作天學到的1數目字. 但句字的前後也是一樣的.



我覺得聆聽比只懂得講話來得更重要.



(需要懂得聽到的印度話)



救命: bachao

一定: nishchit hee

歡迎: Aapaka svaagat hai

嘩: Vaah!


Namaste

Main, ek khaana ordar karana chaahata hoon

Main tandoree memne chaimpiyan ordar karana chaahata hoon

Yah kitane ka hai (how much is it)
Ok! Phir milenge!


（watch Slumdog millionaire)
-貧民窟里的百萬富翁


開始做暗網仔其中一樣最叻的事, 就是看歷史.




早於5萬5千年前人類已經居住印度. Hindi印地話公元7世紀開始出現. 今時今日所講的Hindi來自新德里, 而1948年印度政府獨立後, 1949年9月14號印地話正式成為印度的官方語言, 推翻之前英國政府所定的Urdu語言.



為了讓自己今晩能跟dou si有最好的接觸: 我決定買了Hindi最出名的人生哲學書 ‘the monk who sold his Ferrari’ 講一個訴訟律師25歲方hei職業然後往喜馬拉雅山的洗dik心ling之lui.



(Say some parts of the book)

The constant pressure and exhaughsting schedule of a world class trial lawyer had also broken his most important- and perhaps most human-endowment: his sprit.



(Then use those words in sentence grammars)





Namaste adhyaapak! mai merra naam暗網仔 aap se milkar khushi hui



Hi teacher my name is...nice to meet you)



Namaste mahoday, main ek aadesh banaana chaahata hoon


[How to write hindi 印地語]



我真心覺得學寫印度話識一點簡單的英文比較容易翻譯.

原來印度話的重要發音是 ‘a’ 聲. 差不多所有的字都會有這個發音.



表演時間!!!


印度話另一樣特色就是用一clothesline (晾衣繩) 連起每一個字

其實經歷過這3天我最大的感受是看到以前讀書的自己. 第一天開始總是精力充沛, 但真正學到的東西都是最表面的東西. 也當然喜歡玩.


其實我之前在日本住了幾個月. 之後常常後悔一句日文也沒有學到. 只是用英文跟其他人溝通. 但現在我覺得...不學也ok. 因為我學習能應該只是很一般!

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