《美國抗爭白人警察暴力執勤事件，野火燎原，抗爭者在紐約包圍川普大樓》

抗議群眾在美國各大城市包括洛杉磯、亞特蘭大、芝加哥蔓延。

明尼蘇達即將進入第五個騷動的夜晚。市長表示此抗議的激烈方式，已經超越了白人警察執法過當的合法界線。George Floyd death: Minnesota governor decries violent protests https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-us-canada-52863506

* Thousands of demonstrators protesting the death of George Floyd took to the streets of New York City for a third day on Saturday, blocking traffic, setting fire to police vehicles and scuffling with officers at simultaneous marches that raged through all five boroughs and briefly stopped outside of Trump Tower in Midtown Manhattan.

* In a third day of demonstrations, protesters also blocked the West Side Highway and scuffled with the police in Brooklyn.

* Standoffs intensified across the country on Saturday. In Minneapolis, officials were anticipating a fifth night of unrest.

* As protests escalated, mayors ordered people off the streets in some of America’s largest cities, including Los Angeles, Chicago, Atlanta, Miami and Philadelphia.

https://www.nytimes.com/…/n…/protests-nyc-george-floyd.html…

BBC中文網整理美國過去種族衝突史：https://www.bbc.com/zhongwen/trad/world-52861331…

花博絮語：從不請專業口譯到官網文宣菜英文——臺中宣言

花博又「花現」問題！
（「花現GNP」是花博宣傳口號 XD）

談談臺中市府官網宣傳《臺中宣言》的英文標題，見圖。

原版：累贅、不像樣的的台式菜英文：

《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People

設法順著原標題想表達的意思改成及格的英文：

The Taichung Declaration has redefined the pursuit of GNP growth in a new proposal of Green, Nature, and People

英文雖然對了，但仍累贅，沒有標題的樣子。

再改，使其精簡易懂，有標題樣：

The Taichung Declaration redefines GNP as Green, Nature, and People

最後這標題比較令人滿意，簡明、有重點、有哏。

* 重點明確：臺中宣言提出GNP新定義
* 明示GNP所代表的新名，但細節賣關子
* 藉此吸引讀者閱讀內文一探究竟

原標題在文法、寫作上的問題：

* 英文不存在中文新式書名號《……》

* 亂用動詞原形raise，不合文法

* 「GNP Promote」是啥？看似想表達「GNP提升」、「提升GNP」？就算視爲一個方案名，這也是糟糕的台式英文，正如Taiwan(,) Touch Your Heart 給人的感覺，無法端上國際。
問題出在把不合文法的動詞原形 promote、touch 一路用到底，不管意思如何，這顯示英語尚在牙牙學語階段，尚無動詞變化的意識和能力。

爲何 GNP Promote 是菜英文？進一步佐證：

請上 Google 搜索 "GNP Promote" （記得加英文引號），出現百餘條結果，清一色與「臺中宣言」有關，細查其實皆出自同一則臺中政府官方英文新聞文章，即本文探討的文章標題。難道「提升GNP」這概念在全人類有英語記錄的歷史中，是臺中市府首推？當然不！更合理的推論是：

一、像樣的英文不是這樣寫。
二、不像樣的這個英文表達，在全宇宙為臺中市府獨創。

這篇文宣，判斷又是不重視翻譯專業的結果。其實，有待批評的英文書寫問題還多著，有興趣的讀者不妨一讀，親自感受一下。

正如不久前逢甲大學一位外國英語教授針對「英語列爲第二官方語言」的計畫投書賴院長，批評這做法是緣木求魚，我也認爲台灣政府各層級應該檢討是否真已準備好，有能力拿出像樣的對內、對外的英語書寫。答案好像不證自明。

以下轉錄臺中官網全文，先是介紹何謂臺中宣言，後是臺中宣言英文版。（連結見留言）

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《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People

Issued by Information Bureau Date:2018-04-19

Taichung will conduct World Flora Expo in November. Green productivity proposed by the City Government was based on the Flora Expo addressed concepts of Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability.「Taichung Declaration」is aiming for inviting 100 cities to sign up. Taichung City Mayor, Chia-lung Lin has signed the declaration with Changwon City Mayor, Ahn Sang-soo tonight at Masan Baseball Stadium in South Korea, he also kicked off the starting game for the Taiwanese baseball pitcher, Weichung Wang, who is working currently in South Korea. It’s very meaningful to have Changwon City as the first city to sign up to the Taichung Declaration.

The theme of 2018 Taichung World Flora Expo is「Exploring GNP」 which change the old meaning of GNP as Gross National Product. Redefined GNP now means Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability for pursuing green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity and embrace the nature in addition to pursuing the technological development. to make people’s living better. We wish to promote and raise the awareness of enhanced collaborations between international societies because this is the only way to connect people to help each other for sharing the goodness and prosperity for the world. (4/11*11)*Information Bureau.

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Taichung Declaration：

《Taichung Declaration》
A New Proposal for GNP

Have you ever thought about that, sound of blooming, could be heard?

Modern people are busy in earning their livings when they are pursuing the development of economics and technologies. They’ve been too busy to see things through so they’ve forgotten to listen to the hearts, realize the nature how close they are relying on the environment.

In 2018, let’s find out the balance for ourselves, let’s listen to the whispers of the nature, let’s listen to the happy sounds of the blooming, we can feel the the value of life and how great to be alive. After all, the meaning of life is to make the world better.

2018 Taichung World Flora Expo will raise a new proposal for GNP. GNP has it’s own life and means Green, Nature and People so it is no more a neutral number of Gross National Product. GNP stands for green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity to make people’s living better.

It’s the time to move forwards, it’s the time to look back to the past. When we move forwards to develop the smart technologies in the future, we should remember to turn to embrace the nature again to facilitate the ecological eternity. We believe the prosperity and environmental protection can exist concurrently while the technologies can live with the nature.

Green Productivity

City in green and green in the city. The economical growth traded off by the environment will no more last as we know quite well how to play the role as one of the members in the global village. By applying green technologies, reducing energy consumption and create the shared resources to construct a sustainable city with green production and green economics as the backbone.

Nature Sustainability

The mountain geography left from the ice age and the recent wetland scenes formed by the waves and tides are all the low polluted ecological environment and diverse biological systems we would like to sustain. We will never pay the price of nature to pursue the technological prosperity again. We will rebuild the tight connections between people and nature to find back the harmony and balance between people and nature.

People with Green-ability

We are anticipating people will develop their green concepts and capabilities. Such trivial things as personal thought, diet, living and action or big scope as urban construction and future development, all of them will become the group energy of Green to contribute to the international society. So-called green concepts is to implement the actions, including respect the varieties and embrace diversity. No matter in the aspects of culture, race, politics, education or religion, we will maintain the old traditions and develop the innovations to share a better future with everyone. The aesthetics of living is to live with varieties and grow with the compatibilities.

We believe,
The perfect balance among production, ecology and living can be obtained.
Listen to the nature, connect with the society and link to the world.
Collaborate and facilitate the development of international non-government organizations.
Create the new model of urban management.
Because we connect with each other,
We will share the achievements and good results.

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3/5/2014 @Good Friends Cafe Fayse 吴国菲 办了他的第一场个人音乐会《我不是歌手 飨乐会》。就是这样的音乐，这样的演绎方式，这一场音乐会，让大家不断催促吴国菲推出个人专辑！

This is the kind of music that sparks huge interest in Fayse's solo album.... shot during Fayse's solo concert 《Not a Star Dine-in Concert》 in May 2014, you now can decide if you want to see Fayse's debut solo album out in the market!

出不出，你决定！—— 吴国菲《Fayse The Music》全民集资专辑
预购／投资请到：www.mystartr.com/projects/fayse

自从 Fayse 吴国菲 亮相 #脱口唱 办了 #飨乐会 后，大家对于吴国菲出专辑的询问不曾间断...... 你真的希望吴国菲出专辑吗？我们把吴国菲是否出专辑的命运交给你。请你用投资或预购的行动表态支持！

吴国菲《Fayse The Music》专辑——收录7首歌（4首吴国菲原创曲，3首翻唱歌）、拍摄三支MV—— 一张完整的吴国菲 Funk-Acid Jazz-Blues-Pop强烈个人风格的专辑。我们有团队，我们有概念，我们有构想，对吴国菲的音乐有信心，也很期待。但是我们没有资金。最关键的是——我们不肯定那些希望吴国菲推出专辑的询问，是不是真实的需求。

每张专辑预购售价是RM40(大马半岛邮费全免,沙巴砂拉越与海外邮费另计)。我们估计所需要的制作与生产费是RM50,000。只要我们筹得RM30,000，吴国菲的首张专辑就能正式生产。如果在60天内，31/8/2014前，你们的预购或投资无法达到RM30,000总数，吴国菲的专辑计划就会取消，每一分钱都会归还给已经投资的你。

你愿意投资好音乐吗？如果成功，这将是大马首张乐迷集资推出的中文专辑！靠你了！

更多详情，可浏览：吴国菲 FB: http://www.facebook.com/showmeyourfayse
留意聆听网页：http://www.610t.com/


"Fayse The Music" -- Crowd Funded Music Album Project

Are you really anticipating Fayse's debut album? Now this is your chance! We are putting the honour and Fayse's fate in your hand allowing you to decide whether Fayse should be producing his first solo album, by investing in it through pre-order.

We have a strong team, a brilliant concept behind the BIG idea, and definite confidence in Fayse's music, but we do not have the luxury of funding, and the most crucial of all, we are uncertain if your ever-going enquiries in regards to whether Fayse would be releasing his solo album could potentially be translated into actual album sales.

Fayse's album will carry the title 《Fayse The Music》- inclusive of 7 songs (4 Originals by Fayse + 3 Cover songs) ; 3 Music Videos will be produced. All these would easily sum up to a forecasted production cost of RM50,000. Based on pre-order selling price of RM40 each (postage within Peninsular Malaysia waived, Sabah, Sarawak & overseas delivery postage will be charged accordingly), we have done the calculation and decided that we would materialize the project and kick off the album production, ONLY if we could raise a minimum of RM30,000. This will be done via Crowd Funding online over a course of limited time period of 60 days. Under any circumstances, if this number is not achieved by end of the Crowd Funding campaign, your contribution will be refunded, and the project will then be called off.

Are you willing to invest in good music? If so, this will be the first ever crowd-funded Chinese Album in Malaysia! It's all up to you!

To pre-order or to support:
www.mystartr.com/projects/fayse

For more info, please visit:
fayse FB: http://www.facebook.com/showmeyourfayse
610t webpage：http://www.610t.com