CẮP SÁCH GIẢI NGỐ IELTS FT. SIÊU SAO Hoang Minh Thong

Ụa mọi người ơi, bữa h mọi người dằn vặt mị chuyện gì có nhớ kooooo? Ngoài sự vụ ông-chủ-nhà (tạm thông báo, đã thu câu hỏi, giờ chỉ còn chờ ông chủ nhà travel về thôi), mị còn bị dằn vặt các thể loại câu hỏi hàn lâm như thi ai-eo. Mà hỡi ôi, đời mị có thi ai-eo bao h. Có chăng sau này phải vượt biên qua nhà người anh em thiện lành cà-ná-đà thì may ra phải thi. Nhưng hiện giờ chắc chưa đâu, nên có biết gì mà đua chen với thiên hạ đầy rẫy cao nhân ai-eo 8, 9 chấm đồ.

NHƯNG! Đã có anh hùng phi tới giải cứu mị rồi các bạn ạ!!! Mị đã nhá hàng từ khi còn 25k subs đó haha, rằng một ngày đẹp trời mị sẽ lôi bạn Thông lẫy lừng ra phỏng vấn, "Toán 05-08 Phổ Thông Năng Khiếu, [...] siêu xịn với 8.5 overall (R9, L9, S8, W8.5), giảng viên trường ĐH Khoa Học Xã Hội - Nhân Văn, là thủ khoa khoa Quan Hệ Quốc Tế trước đó sau khi đã dằn túi giải 3 HSG Quốc Gia môn Văn năm 12. Dù từng đạt HCB giải Toán quốc tế tại Singapore năm lớp 10!"

And again, mị ko có cổ phần gì trong EdSpace shinh đẹp đúng chất learning space của bạn Thông đâu. Mị chỉ là cô gái PR dạo cho những người, những thứ mị thấy chất chơi. (Cũng có nhiều emails tới mời mị hợp tác PR sản phẩm, sponsor các kiểu mà mị ko có rảnh làm chuyện mị ko biết, cũng ko có thời gian tìm hiểu chuyện người ta, nên bye).

Nói chung, đây là là một post thu thập câu hỏi cho chuyên gia ai-eo trả lời, còn mị ngồi nghe phụ họa mua vui thôi hihi. Các bạn có thắc mắc gì về ai-eo thì cứ comment xuống, mị sẽ đọc và lọc rồi phỏng vấn bạn Thông nha. Mong đó sẽ là clip sâu sát ai-eo, giải đáp hết vấn vương, để các bạn chỉ cần tập trung vào học đúng hướng thôi ha (dù học sai thì vẫn thấm đc ít nha, còn hơn ko học).

Dài dòng quạ. Vậy nha!

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NÂNG CẤP TỪ WRITING B2 (6.5 IELTS) LÊN C2 (8.5+ IELTS)

Hôm nay chúng mình sẽ chia sẻ một xíu về writing để "đổi món" nhen. Đây là một bài viết của một bạn học viên ở EdSpace (trình độ Keystones 2), và được hướng dẫn để chỉnh sửa, hoàn thiện.

Đề bài lấy từ sách The Cambridge Official Guide to IELTS, Practice Test 05 với nội dung sau:

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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Đây là bài viết gốc của bạn học viên:

In the modern world, it is an ugly truth that we are being watched by advance technology. Although some people have concern towards the drawback of monitoring system, I personally support its positive side and agree with those who think such technologies are far more benefits.

Those who oppose the surveillance technologies may argue that such systems infringe personal freedom. Since our every moment is being tracked, we may feel uneasy and even insecure sometimes. For instance, when we go shopping, there are multiple cameras installed by the owners are recording our every movement. Additionally, we may feel uncomfortable as we do not know what will they do with those recording. As a result, some people do not prefer to enjoy their leisure time at public places as they used to do in the past.

However, I believe the monitoring innovation, like other technology, also brings endless benefits to our daily life. One of the most significant benefits is that it helps strengthens our security system. For example, unlike a few decades ago we are now able to use the CCTV footage to catch criminals and support the crime investigation. Thus this not only allows us to speed up the investigation process but also makes the trial more efficiently. Furthermore, we can get immediate medical aid if someone is in trouble. In the past year, thanks to the efficient surveillance system setup on the expressway, control center in Ho Chi Minh provided timely support for a number of accidents and save many lives.

In conclusion, despite the arguments against the digital monitoring system, I strongly believe that its advantages outweighs the disadvantages as it makes our day-to-day more secure and boost our security system.

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Có thể thấy, bạn học viên đã trả lời khá tốt câu hỏi với các luận điểm liên quan. Mỗi luận điểm đã có sử dụng luận cứ và luận chứng. Từ vựng và cấu trúc câu linh hoạt và đa dạng. Tuy vậy, bài viết vẫn có nhiều điểm có thể cải thiện:
- Sắp xếp lại ý tưởng để có mạch logic tuyến tính (linearity - đặc trưng của tiếng Anh - EdSpace sẽ chia sẻ trong notes sau về tư duy ngôn ngữ trong tiếng Anh).
- Tách đoạn để đảm bảo thao tác phát triển lập luận học thuật: Argument development, với mỗi đoạn tập trung vào một central idea.
- Cải thiện từ dùng cho tự nhiên với văn phong học thuật tiếng Anh. Một số từ đang được sử dụng theo logic "dịch Việt - Anh" nên sẽ khó hiểu với ngườ bản xứ.
- Chỉnh sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (bài viết gặp khá nhiều vấn đề ngữ pháp phổ biến của học viên người Việt).

Trong hình là bài viết được EdSpace và bạn cùng chỉnh sửa, phát triển dựa trên cấu tứ & lập luận của chính bạn học viên.

Bài viết đầu tiên được Cambridge Write & Improve (*) chấm điểm B2, và bài viết revised được chấm điểm C2+ (tương đương trình độ proficiency & native).

Các bạn có muốn đọc nhiều bài theo thể loại này không hen? Comment cho EdSpace biết với nhé. Nếu có nhiều bạn thích đọc thì EdSpace sẽ chăm chỉ và có động lực viết & chia sẻ thể loại này hơn với các bạn ^^

Ghi chú:
(*)Cambridge Write & Improve: là một hệ thống Online System của Cambridge English giúp bạn luyện tập writing - EdSpace cũng sẽ có một bài chia sẻ về công cụ tuyệt vời này sớm đến các bạn.

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Crysis 3 is a first-person shooter video game developed by Crytek and published by Electronic Arts for Microsoft Windows, PlayStation 3, and Xbox 360. Officially announced 16 April 2012, it is the third main installment of the Crysis series, a sequel to the 2011 video game Crysis 2. The multiplayer portion of the game was developed by Crytek UK.

Set in the year 2047, the game takes place in New York City, which has been encased in a giant Nanodome created by the corrupt CELL corporation, and turned into a veritable urban rainforest. Crysis 3's story revolves around Alcatraz, Prophet's successor, and a Nanosuit holder who is on a quest to take revenge on the Alpha Ceph, the leader of the Ceph alien race, with the help of Prophet's former comrade, Psycho. The game's story serves as the end of the Crysis trilogy. Gameplay revolves around the use of the Nanosuit, which grants players a variety of abilities such as being invisible. New features introduced in Crysis 3 include a new Nanosuit ability called "Rip & Throw", a new compound bow and the "hacking" feature, which allows players to hack into enemies' equipment, drones, and automated security defenses.

The game is set in a post-apocalyptic New York City, in an effort to combine the urban landscape of Crysis 2 and the forest setting of the original Crysis. The game introduces the "Seven Wonders", with each wonder having its own unique landscape and tactical layout. Due to complaints about Crysis 2's linearity, the game's levels were opened up so as to grant players more freedom. The development team also put efforts into creating a more emotional story, and the story's protagonist, Alcatraz, was inspired by the lead character of District 9. The game was developed by a team of 100 people during its 23-month development cycle.

Crysis 3 was met with positive reception after its release. Praise was directed at the game's level design, visuals and multiplayer, while it was criticised for its story and length. With a budget of $66 million, the game sold 205,000 copies in its debut month, and became a commercial failure for Electronic Arts. The game was later included in The Crysis Trilogy, a bundle released on 20 February 2014.

Crysis 3 Part 7 Only Human

Crysis 3 is a first-person shooter video game developed by Crytek and published by Electronic Arts for Microsoft Windows, PlayStation 3, and Xbox 360. Officially announced 16 April 2012, it is the third main installment of the Crysis series, a sequel to the 2011 video game Crysis 2. The multiplayer portion of the game was developed by Crytek UK.

Set in the year 2047, the game takes place in New York City, which has been encased in a giant Nanodome created by the corrupt CELL corporation, and turned into a veritable urban rainforest. Crysis 3's story revolves around Alcatraz, Prophet's successor, and a Nanosuit holder who is on a quest to take revenge on the Alpha Ceph, the leader of the Ceph alien race, with the help of Prophet's former comrade, Psycho. The game's story serves as the end of the Crysis trilogy. Gameplay revolves around the use of the Nanosuit, which grants players a variety of abilities such as being invisible. New features introduced in Crysis 3 include a new Nanosuit ability called "Rip & Throw", a new compound bow and the "hacking" feature, which allows players to hack into enemies' equipment, drones, and automated security defenses.

The game is set in a post-apocalyptic New York City, in an effort to combine the urban landscape of Crysis 2 and the forest setting of the original Crysis. The game introduces the "Seven Wonders", with each wonder having its own unique landscape and tactical layout. Due to complaints about Crysis 2's linearity, the game's levels were opened up so as to grant players more freedom. The development team also put efforts into creating a more emotional story, and the story's protagonist, Alcatraz, was inspired by the lead character of District 9. The game was developed by a team of 100 people during its 23-month development cycle.

Crysis 3 was met with positive reception after its release. Praise was directed at the game's level design, visuals and multiplayer, while it was criticised for its story and length. With a budget of $66 million, the game sold 205,000 copies in its debut month, and became a commercial failure for Electronic Arts. The game was later included in The Crysis Trilogy, a bundle released on 20 February 2014.