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: I (XXX) would like to apply the dormitory of the University of XXX because
: these following reasons:
This is Mike Wang. I am writing this letter to apply for a room in
University of Tokyo's school dormitory.
: 1.I believe that the experience of living in the dormitory of XXX will
a
: broaden my horizon because I can interactive with those students coming from
those 去掉
: different country. Speaking of my personality, I am a friendly person so I
countries.
這裡前後兩句沒有關連性，放在同一段很牽強。
: believe that I can get along very well with other foreign students in the
剛才已經『believe』過了。不要重複使用。
: dormitory.
我實在不了解為什麼申請宿舍要牽扯到 『broaden horizon』。不就是先來後到？
滿了就排候補？而且只有『friendly』的人才有資格住宿舍？
: 2.The accommodation fee of the dormitory is very reasonable especially for
: privately financed international students. Besides, the Tokyo’s living cost
個人覺得這一句『The accommodation .... students』應該刪掉。
Tokyo's living expense is significantly higher than that of other cities
in Japan, thus an opportunity for me to stay in a school dormitory would
greatly reduce my financial burden.
: is higher than other cities. If I have the chance to live in the dormitory it
: will be greatly relieve my financial pressure.
底下這一句該刪掉。
: According to these reasons, it will be very appreciate and gratitude if you
: can offer the dormitory to me.
※ 編輯: hoch 來自: 120.126.36.193 (01/19 14:04)