麻煩高手幫忙修飾一下我有標記的部分


I can't remember what I planned tomorrow
I can't remember when it's time to go

When I look in the mirror
Tracing lines with a pencil
I remember what came before

Q:當我看著鏡中的自己，並用鉛筆畫出了痕跡
才想起曾經發生了什麼事


I wanted to think there was endless love

Q:這裡"think" 表示 "相信"嗎?

Until I saw the light dim in your eyes

Q:直到我看到你眼裡有了"朦朧的光線"
(請問"dim" 還有更好的翻譯嗎?)

In the dead of the night I found out
Sometimes there's love that won't survive

New York City
Such a beautiful disease
New York City
Such a beautiful,
Such a beautiful disease

Laura kept all her disappointments
Locked up in a box behind her closet door
She pulled the blinds and listened to the thunder

With no way out from the family store
Q:在沒有出口的"家庭商店"?
(怎麼翻都怪)


We all told her things could get better
When you just say goodbye

I'll lay awake one more night
Caught in a vision I want to deny

Q:我將夜夜難眠，陷入了一個我想否認的情境
(這裡 "caught in" 翻為"陷入" 適合嗎?)


And did I mention the note that I found
Taped to my locked front door
It talked about no regrets
As it slipped from my hand to the scuffed tile floor

I rode the train for hours on end
And watched the people pass me by

It could be that it has no end
Just an action junkie's lullaby

Q:就像是個毒蟲的一搖籃曲一樣毫無止境


New York City

We were full of the stuff that every dream rested
As if floating on a lumpy pillow sky
Caught up in the whole illusion
That dreams never pass us by

Q:這整段單字都懂 都是怎麼翻都不順
(這裡的"dream"是翻為"夢想"還是"惡夢"，夢想感覺很怪)


Came to a tattoed conclusion

Q:"tattoed concusion"是翻為既成事實嗎?

That the big one was knocking on the door
What started as a mass delusion

Q:這裡一樣單字都懂，可是翻起來很怪

Would take me far from the place I adore


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