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✍️ Bài mẫu Writing Task 1:
The pie charts compare the percentages of energy consumed for various purposes and how much greenhouse gas is emitted by an average Australian family.
Overall, heating accounts for the highest energy consumption, yet the largest proportion of CO2 emitted belongs to water-heating.
42% of energy consumed in an Australian family is used for heating, which is the highest figure on the chart, followed by that of water-heating, at approximately 30%. In contrast, the figure for other appliances makes up merely 15% and the rest, including refrigeration, cooling and lighting, occupy trivial proportions, under 7% each.
In terms of greenhouse gas released, water-heating and other appliances are the major causes, with about 32% and 28% respectively. In comparison, the data of heating and refrigeration are lower, standing at about 15% each. Both cooling and lighting are responsible for the production of one-tenth of total gas emissions.

✍️ Bài mẫu Writing Task 2:
It is sometimes argued that punishments should be imposed on children so that they could differentiate between right and wrong in the early years of their lives. While I accept that punishments can sometimes have positive effects on children and therefore should be applied, I believe that parents and teachers should choose proper ways to punish their children.
Punishments could change awareness of children. Once they have wrong-doings such as disobeying or telling a lie, instant punishments are vital for them to realize their mistakes and eliminate bad behaviors. Parents could give their children warnings or light physical punishments if they are too stubborn. For instance, when I skipped classes at primary school, my mother asked me to walk to school rather than take a bus and do chores for a week. This not only helps me realize truancy is improper but also increases my self-discipline.
However, parents and teachers should choose appropriate ways to teach good behaviours to children. Harsh corporal punishments should not be used because they affect negatively children’s psychology, such as mental disorders and deep depressions, and pose a threat to their physical health. Instead, parents can opt for educational punishments such as doing housework, setting limit to recreational time, or reducing allowance to avoid money wasting for useless activities. Teachers, similarly, should not reinforce corporal punishment or humiliation but alternatively require them to write their wrongs to educate them about classroom’s disciplines or submit more homework.
In conclusion, it seems to me that punishment is of significance to educate children how to distinguish right from wrong, which punishments are applied should be carefully chosen.

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aspire (v.) 立志
prodigious (a.) 偉大的；奇異的
embody (v.) 象徵；使具體化
testify (v.) 作證
unequivocally (adv.) 異口同聲地
etch (v.) 銘刻(在心)
perpetrate (v.) 犯法
mortgage (n.) 抵押貸款
dastardly (a.) 卑鄙的
diabolically (adv.) 惡魔般地
paraphrase (v.)(n.) 換句話說
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sordid (a.) 骯髒汙穢的
standardize (v.) 標準化
spouse (n.) 配偶
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disservice (n.) 幫倒忙
abdicate (v.) 讓位
egregious (a.) 惡名昭彰的
wonk (n.) (口)書呆子；工作狂
controversy (n.) 爭議
tobacco (n.) 菸草
obfuscate (v.) 使混亂；使困惑
construe (v.) 理解；翻譯
detour (v.)(n.) 繞路
assorted (a.) 綜合的
defer (v.) 延遲
hit the jackpot (phrase) 中頭彩
columnist (n.) 專欄作家
truancy (n.) 曠課/職
muster (n.)(v.) 集合
for the sake of N (phrase) 看在⋯的份上
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