- Chữa đề Writing thật tiếp theo thôi cả nhà ơi - Đề số 10 nhé: Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Bài mẫu:

The state spending on public health has become a widely perpetual concern. Some individuals argue that these already scarce resources should be reserved for the prevention of lifestyle-related illness. In my opinion, the government should focus more on the prevention of illnesses rather than medical treatment.

On the one hand, certain acute diseases, non-preventable regardless of governmental efforts to promote a healthy lifestyle, still need a state budget allocation for medical care. One of the primary duties of the government is to provide publicly funded healthcare to the whole population. Therefore, covering therapeutic and medical costs for those already developing symptoms of acute conditions would be a significant part of that duty, helping mitigate the financial burden associated with those maladies. In other words, a dearth of investment in treatment would be devastating patients’ individual life and wreaking havoc on overall social welfare.
On the other hand, promoting a healthy lifestyle as a prevention strategy is meant to avoid the entire economic burden of chronic diseases, affecting a significant proportion of the population. Those conditions, occurring across different life course stages, share common preventable risk factors relating to unhealthy behaviors, including poor nutrition, inadequate physical activity, and chronic heavy drinking and smoking. If left unchecked, trends in chronic diseases risk factors combined with a growing and aging population will increase the numbers of people living with chronic conditions, later causing the heavy burden of illness in patients, their families, and the community. Therefore, given a scarcity of state budgets for various public services, the government should directly provide information, including health education campaigns, or regulating information, such as limits on advertising and guidelines on food labelings. As a result, positive changes in individual lifestyle would follow, helping them withstand the ravages of time, and saving the state budget for other economically beneficial needs, such as technological investment, education, and infrastructure, rather than spending on treatment.
In conclusion, while allocating its healthcare budget in treatment, the government should promote a healthy lifestyle to avoid preventable chronic diseases due to its economic rationality.
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- to be spent poorly on projects that fail to…: bị chi cho các dự án mà không hoàn thành được mục tiêu gì đó
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Vaccination - satu perkataan yang hangat diperkatakan sekarang, kan? It’s important that we play our part to get vaccinated against Covid-19 so that we can achieve herd immunity and keep each other safe. The same for rabies. In the last few years, Sarawak has seen a rise in rabies cases, and we need to work together to prevent unnecessary losses.

So let’s talk about rabies. All mammals - including dogs, cats and humans, can catch rabies. It’s an incurable (but preventable) virus that attacks the brain and spinal cord. A mammal catches rabies by getting bitten by, or coming into contact with the saliva of another infected animal.
Rabies CAN BE PREVENTED through vaccination, and in Sarawak, the government has a FREE anti-rabies vaccination programme for dogs, through Jabatan Perkhidmatan Verterinar Sarawak or the Department of Veterinary Services Sarawak. Whatsapp / message the DVS Sarawak anti-rabies hotline at +6016-2557267 to find out where you can bring dogs and cats to get vaccinated.

Rabies boleh dicegahkan mll vaksinasi. Jabatan Perkhidmatan Veterinar Sarawak masih lagi mengadakan program pemvaksinan anti-rabies anjing yang PERCUMA. Kitak blh whatsapp / mesej hotline anti-rabies +6016-2557267 utk maklumat lanjut.

By doing this we not only protect our beloved pets, but also ourselves, our families, our neighbours, and our home Sarawak. Sayang Sarawak ya guys ❤ Remember - rabies is preventable, and it’s our job to protect each other.
In the coming months I’ll be sharing more about the anti-rabies campaign, kalau ada apa2 soalan mengenai ni, tanya saja ya.

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Seven-day average 7 天平均值
Hospitalizations 住院人數
Florida 佛羅里達州
Unvaccinated 未接種疫苗者
CDC (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention)
Epidemic 疫情
Pandemic 全球大流行病
Preventable 可預防的
Democrats 民主黨支持者
Republicans 共和黨支持者
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Rural areas 鄉下地方
Misinformation 不正確的訊息 / 假消息
Conspiracy theories 陰謀論
Lies 謊言
Social media sites 社群平台
Surgeon general 醫療總監
Incentives 獎勵
Cannabis 大麻
Little appetite 興趣缺缺
Grapple, grapples, grappling, grappled
Grapple with 人
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BB出生，經過痛苦的生產過程，然後投入媽媽懷中，這個畫面是否很溫馨？但殘酷的現實是，媽媽只抱了一會，就被姑娘帶去「拮屁股」，打防疫針，爸爸媽媽看著也心痛。有人說打了針才可幫孩子抵抗病源，但亦有人指疫苗很多副作用，究竟誰對誰錯？雙方都是想小朋友健康成長，但為何會出現兩極意見？

要討論打與不打，其實我們又是否清楚：疫苗，到底是什麼？

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Eggertson, L. (2010). Lancet retracts 12-year-old article linking autism to MMR vaccines. Canadian Medical Association Journal, 182(4). doi:10.1503/cmaj.109-3179

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立法會五題：疫苗含硫柳汞的安全性【新聞公報】，政府新聞網（2016年4月20日）
接種疫苗預防傳染病（2014年），香港特別行政區政府衞生署網站。

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Kayue（2016年3月18日）。美國研究︰麻疹疫症感染者 未接種疫苗佔多數。The News Lens關鍵評論。