BÀI MẪU IELTS WRITING THỰC TẾ - BAND 7

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🔑 Thầy chia thời gian như sau:
3 phút: brainstorm ý tưởng
7 phút: viết dàn ý + cấu trúc
5 phút: viết mở bài
12 phút x 2: viết 2 đoạn thân bài
1 phút cuối: kết bài

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ĐỀ BÀI: Some people predict that in the future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. What might be the reasons for it? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

⚡ In recent years, the prospect of self-driving cars is becoming increasingly more realistic—instead of merely a science fiction concept. Our tendency for technological progress and our increasing concern for safety are the primary reasons behind this development, for which I believe will make our society a better place.

Self-driving cars came about as a natural part of human progress. We have always looked for ways to innovate, to make life more comfortable and convenient. We used to have milkmen, for instance, who were made redundant along with the invention of refrigerators. Automated cars likewise represent the same concept of natural technological innovation. Furthermore, our survival instinct has always led to a continual push for increased safety. A robot driver is a perfect worker—it never gets tired or loses focus, compared to a human driver who easily gets fatigued or distracted. A future with autonomous car is therefore a safer future free of senseless traffic deaths.

I believe the future with self-driving cars brings about a more meaningful life for humans. For once, we can get rid of the stress caused by traffic. During peak hours, urban residents are stuck in bumper-to-bumper traffic that can last for hours. With a robot driver, we can simply take a nap or listen to music, thus avoiding the stress of driving altogether. In addition, automation of any kind always helps humans toward more meaningful work. Millions of people work in the transportation industry, performing the monotonous task of driving. When we delegate this repetitive work to robots, we are free for more fulfilling pursuits—such as in the arts, the exploration of space, or cleaning up the environment.

In conclusion, the adaptation of self-driving cars is a part of humans’ natural direction toward the future, thanks to which the world will become a better place.

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Một số cụm từ hay:
prospect: viễn cảnh
merely: chỉ là
science fiction: khoa học viễn tưởng
come about: xuất hiện
survival instinct: bản năng sinh tồn
fatigue (n/v): sự mệt mỏi do làm 1 việc gì đó lâu
bring about: mang lại, tạo nên
get rid of: bỏ đi =remove
take a nap: chợp mắt
monotonous (adj): nhàm chán, chỉ có 1 tông
repetitive (adj): lặp đi lặp lại

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Results:
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2. Furuhata Nao: 92.410.202
3. Komiyama Haruka 3.128.156

Prize for third place: Self-produce gravure in UTB. Self-produce gravure means Komi can select the spot and costume on her own.

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