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有時候逛大陸幾個網站，都會提到北美範文，

但光看北美範文的感覺，有時總是像霧裡看花一樣，不明其究。

在amazon逛了逛相關的評價，發現riting skills for the gre/gmat的評價挺不錯的，

就索性買了這本書來看，一看之後驚嘆不已！

簡單的說，這本書其實才是心法，北美選文只是招式而已啊！

如果有人已經買過北美範文的話，真心推薦一定要看看這本書。

特別是Part 2的Issue部分，說明、佈局、練習都在其中。

不過這本書的43頁，有個字拼錯了。ncokg，應該是reckon才對。

Just one tiny mistake.



Argument 模板分享

(網誌板) http://ppt.cc/Es4;


開頭段：
Careful scrutiny of the editorial reveals numerous potential problems with
it-problems that render its auther's position untenable.
The speakers's argument suffers from several reasoning flaws,which together
render the argument unconvincing.
For several reasons,this claim is dubious at best.
Unfortunately,these facts accomplish little toward refuting the assertion
that...
Thus,I find the argument wholly unpersuasive.
This argument relies on several crucial but unsubstantiated assumptions and
is therefore unconvincing as it stands.
Unfortunately,the argument is depend on a series of poorly supported
inferences and therefore is specious at best.
I find this assertion dubious for several reasons.
The argument suffers from several reasoning flaws and is therefore
unconvincing as it stands.
This argument relies on a number of questionable assumptions and is therefore
unpersuasive.
This argument suffers from several reasoning flaws, which together render the
editorial wholly unconvincing.



第一宗罪：無因果聯系
The editorial implies that...however,the editorial provides no evidence to
support this implication.
This argument depents on a series of four cause-and-effect relationships,none
of which the author has established.
The author must establish a clear cause-and-effect relationship
between...and...
It is unfair to infer that the former is attributable solely to the latter.
Here the director might very well confuse cause and effect with mere
correlation.



第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample
The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good
indicator of future trends/hardly suffice to prove a clear trend.
Yet the mere fact that..does not necessarily mean that...
Thus,before I accept the editorial's conclusion,the author must show
that...is representative of...



第三宗罪: 錯誤類比 (based on a false analogy )
With respects to the first of the two facts, the author attempts here to draw
what might amount to a false analogy between...and...
The authors analogy to ... is dubious at best.



第四宗罪 all things are equal
This argument suffers from a classic reasoning flaws:what is true for one
member of a group is also true for that group as a whole.



第五宗罪 Either-Or choice
In short,unless the editorial's auther explores and eliminates other
options,I remain unconvinced that...



第六宗罪 pool/report/survey is doubtful
A final problem with the editorial involves the possibility of additional
results from the survey-results that the editorial neclects to mention.
If the results turn out to be unreliable as aresult, then any conclusion
based on those results must be deemed unreliable as well.
The memo provides no evidence that the reports are reliable.



第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption
The speaker neglects to consider and rule out other explainations-for
instance,...Without eliminating other possible reasons for ...,the speaker
cannot convice me that...
Besides, the author ignores the possibility that...
While this might be the case,the author must provide clear evidence to
substantiat this assumption.
Yet it is entirely possible that...
The argument relies on the assumpution that ...



讓步
Admitting for the sake of argument that...
Even if the author can prove that...
Even assuming that...



作者這樣不對說服不了我。。。

Otherwise,I cannot accept the author's inference that...
Accordingly,the author's contention that...is questionable at best.
Otherwise,I remain skeptical of the author's final conclution that...
Until the author supplies this sort of evidence,he cannot convince me that...
If this is the case, the author's implicit it claim that ... would be very
weak indeed.
The author must first convince me that ... ,not until then could I begin to
consider the recommendation.
Therefore,I remain unconvinced that...
However, with no solid evidence to support this reasoning, the claim amounts
to little more than pure conjecture.



結尾措施
To fully assess the ultimate claim, I would need reliable detailed... should
it follow the chair's recommendation.
To bolster it, the author might conductor a scientific survey of...
In order to properly evaluate it, ar a minimun,I would want to know...,and I
would want to survey ... about...
The author must also show that the survey results are reliabl and that they
accurately reflect...
In order to convince me that ..., the author must at least ...
To fully persuade me, the author must also explain why...
To obtain this sort of proof, I would need to survey...

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