Getting ready for next week HBL and my Digital Marketing course... 🤪

I need to buy toto/4D.. both have to start on the same day.. LOL. 🤯

Snacks plan out ready, schedule plan out and @jbl_sg wireless earpiece (Tune 225TWS) ready since all of us will be working/study in the same room.

Earpiece boosted battery life is useful just in case I totally forget to charge. #BusyMom
Most importantly left and right earbuds can be used independently for my zoom calls and music (and even charging), or maybe shut it off to make sure I can hear my girls calling for help.... Pray I can concentrate better.

Let's share what kind of work equipment (if u are WFH) and snacks you guys preparing? Tea egg, muah chee is in my list..

I think even though all of us are ready to attend to our kids HBL needs but still hate to have it. Well.. just stay safe everyone!!

【I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.】
連假後第一天工作日，來聊聊升遷小故事
升不上去到底哪裡出了錯？

以下為 Sonny 老師第一視角撰寫
Sonny老師的翻譯&教學札記
（故事經歷已經當事人同意後分享）

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你知道英文寫作的好壞
可能影響你的職涯甚至人生嗎？

去年有位中階主管來找我求救
他在公司的績效很不錯
工作態度積極、待人客氣和善
但申請了很多次升遷或外派
都屢屢碰壁
他說高階主管全是英語人士
懷疑自己的溝通是不是出了問題

我聽完馬上就跟他說：
可以借我看看你寫的 e-mail 嗎？
不看則已，一看差點昏去（台語）
申請升遷的那篇 e-mail 破綻百出
而且 1️⃣ 第一句就有很大的問題：
I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.

除了信件沒有適當的開頭之外
怎麼會用這麼直接的語氣「要求」升遷呢？
於是我開始跟他講解正式信件
寫作時的原則和概念
請他盡量使用：
This letter is to request a promotion from my current role of ______ to the open role of ______. 這樣的句型和語氣

2️⃣ 第二個比較大的問題
是他雖然有良好的績效和表現
卻沒有具體、量化地描述出來
只寫了：
My excellent performance has increased sales since 2018.

於是我建議他改成：
During the past three years, I have boosted product sales by 12%, trained 15 junior employees, and saved departmental cost by 10%.
用「平行結構」(parallelism) 的方式
把自己成就的細節一一描述出來

3️⃣ 最後，他的信件用 Best 來結尾
稍嫌不夠正式
我建議他改成 Sincerely
向他講解完所有信件細節後
我請他下一封 promotion request 就這樣寫
然後祝他好運

就在上週
我收到了他的感謝信
說成功拿到了外派美國的高階職位
負責面試的主管還跟他說
他的 e-mail 寫得很不錯
這讓我覺得非常開心

果然不好的寫作就像一塊 #絆腳石
好的寫作卻像一塊 #敲門磚
可以幫你開啟無限的機會

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Sonny 老師是台灣浩首席筆譯老師
7 年來，我一路看著老師
如何投入研發心力
打造台灣同學的優質英文寫作課程

老師最近和 Hahow 好學校
合作了「寫作學習計畫」
讓同學到 10/16 23:59 前
都能享 85 折優惠價格
真心大推給想學好英文寫作的你：
https://hahow.in/cr/sonny-eng-writing2

#email真的很重要
#聽說筆譯班的大家都被噹過一波🤫
#不斷注意細節是進步的關鍵

It could change the nature of espionage.

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