感覺畢業一年後的工作一直起起伏伏, 不是很穩定的狀態

先後經歷了補教業,與國貿公司的工作

本身很喜歡國貿方面的工作, 因為想要學很多很多的東西,目前求職也是都針對國貿人員與業務助理方面工作搜尋


想請大家幫忙看一下我的中英文自傳, 有沒友哪裡需要加強修改的地方呢

歡迎指教!!

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中文自傳


您好，我叫XXX，今年2X歲。對於貴公司刊登徵求國貿人員的事，本人深感興趣。自幼
成長於小康家庭, 家裡有父母與兄弟姐妹共六人，家庭氣氛和睦，父母的管教非常開明與
嚴謹，從小就灌輸我們做任何事都應採取積極主動的態度。

自認為是樂觀且積極的人，因此，大學期間，我活躍於校內外打工與系上的社團活動。打
工的經驗使我學習到遭遇困難時，需要耐心與智慧，來面對各項挑戰。當面對無法解決的
問題時，我會主動請益主管來完成交辦的事項；系學會活動的參與，則讓我學習到團隊合
作的重要性，以及組員間彼此意見的交流與溝通的效益。

本身對國貿的領域有極高的興趣, 之前曾在一間國貿公司擔任業務助理。在訂單處理,國
貿的基本常識,或是英文書信往來等工作中收穫良多,也更加深我對國貿這塊領域的了解。
這份工作加深了我做事的細心謹慎度,與客戶與工廠人員的溝通以及書信的互往的能力也
有所提升。

我誠摯的希望能夠在貴公司擔任國貿人員的工作，若能有此機會，我將全力以赴，期許自
己能細心且有效率的完成每一份指派的工作，謝謝！





英文自傳

Dear Sir:
It’s my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself. My name is
XXX, twenty three years old. I’m quite interested in the job your
company advertised about the trade personnel. Grew up in a well-off family,
there are six people in my family, my parents educated us both liberal and
strict; besides, they instilled in me to be a responsible and considerate
individual.

I characterized myself as being an optimistic and active person; hence, I was
vigorous in the part-time job and joined the school affairs in the college.
From the work experiences, I’ve learned to be more patient and wise to
handle the difficult conditions, when I couldn’t settle the consigned works,
I will consult to my boss. In addition, I’ve learned the importance about
the teamwork in joining the school affairs, and the benefits of exchanging
the opinions to others.


I take highly interest in the trade business and have been a sales assistant
before. I learned a lots in this job, not only the trade knowledge, but also
the mail and order handling. This work experience expends my knowledge in the
trade business and enhance my cautiousness and the communication skill, even
the skill of replying the business letter.


With professional yet personal attitude, I am confident that my personality
and past working experiences will prepare me to be an excellent trade
personnel, and be a good fit to the goals and visions of your highly regarded
company. Thank you for your considerations, and forthcoming response.





因為我前一份國貿的工作只有三個月(試用期沒過)

請問這樣寫在自傳或是履歷上好嗎?

因為有學到基本上國貿方面要學的東西, 而這又是我目前想找的工作領域方面

想說提出來好像會比較有競爭力貨是說服力之類的




還請大家幫忙指點一下了

謝謝~~

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