各位版大好：
由於小妹最近剛碩士畢業，需要找工作，想找有關科技業外商的工作，因此需要英文自傳，但不確定自己寫的好不好，已經有利用google, netspeak等網頁查看有無錯誤的部分，希望各位大大能給些意見，謝謝大家。

My name is I-Ju Wang, and I was born in 1993. I graduated from Chiao Tung University where I majored in Material Science in master degree.
There are four members of my family. My father is a store owner, so I need to interact with people when I was young. It lets me become a social person. My mother is an accountant in the travel agency and is also my role model. I learned from her that if I worked hard, I won't regret anything. And I have a younger brother, we can give each other advice when we're going through hard times.
In college, I took part in many public benefit activities; For example, I joined beach cleaning and mountain cleaning activities. It not only keeps our environment clean but also makes me feel good. To cultivate a sense of responsibility, I volunteered to be a class leader and a badminton vice captain. With these experiences, I became more energetic and was able to work under pressure.
After I graduated from college, I worked at the National Synchrotron Radiation Research Center for one year. During this time, I can conduct beamline experiments, design experiments and solve problems by myself. These experiences sparked my interest in doing research, so I decided to study for a master's degree to improve my research ability.
During my Masters, my topic was "Tuning residual stress in highly (111)-oriented nanotwinned Cu". I learned a lot of skills such as electroplating, electropolishing, annealing, and carrying out high vacuum systems and vacuum cavity cleaning. At first none of my experiments working, I was under a lot of pressure. I tried to find the resolution of my experiment and worked around the clock. Fortunately, I found the method of solving the problems and was able to finish my thesis. Trouble shooting gave
me a sense of achievement and made me want to work in the tech industry.
In addition, I possess some experiences related to semiconductors. I participated in the semiconductor equipment course and realized how to operate the semiconductor equipment. I also experienced in electroplating wafers in a technology corporation. These experiences let me have the basic knowledge of semiconductors.
In order to enhance myself, I got many kinds of certificates like TQC-EXCEL 2010, C-level coach of badminton, 7th piano verification, technician for fixed crane operation, etc. I believe that I am a versatile person who can learn and adjust to anything. If I have a chance to work in your company, I would appreciate it so much and make an all-out effort.

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※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/14/2019 13:48:31
了解，還以為那個家庭成員是必需，因為看網路上自傳範本都有就跟著寫了，謝謝大家的建議。
※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.218 臺灣), 08/15/2019 13:25:21
好的，真的非常感謝您!!!
※ 編輯: istee (140.113.136.219 臺灣), 08/19/2019 11:46:58