常犯的寫作邏輯錯誤 (2) 🗣 記得往左滑至圖片開聲音聽講解喔👂🏻 ⛔️ 時間邏輯錯誤 : ❌ In the past, students used to go to school on foot. However, more and more students take public transport. ⚠️ 邏輯: 句中有 "However" 可知作者想表達 "轉折" 語氣; 但記得語意轉折了, 時間也要有一致性喔~ 🐨寫 "However" 的時候也要想想, 我的前後句真的是 "有意義的轉折" 嗎? ⭕ 在句尾 + "nowadays" - (簡單) ⭕ In the past, …… Since the arrival of automobiles in the industrial revolution, transportation has then shifted to private vehicles and public transportations. ⛔️ 時態用錯 : ❌ Over the past few years, more and more people have smartphones. ⚠️ 邏輯: 描述過去到現在的一段時間 + 現在完成式 用decades還是要用years : 看討論的主角 例如. ➡️ 手機, 教育都是近幾十年的議題, 故用 "decades" 較適合 ⭕ Over the past few decades, smartphones have become more common and have shifted from a verbal communication tool to a multimedia one. ⛔️ 時態混亂造成語意混淆 : ❌ By switching to the online learning environment can I make use of the time which is used on other things. ⚠️ 邏輯: 前後都是現在式, 無法讓讀者判別何者先發生 可以用 "originally/initially" 等副詞 來賦予文章前後句時間層次 ⭕ Only by switching to online learning can I make use of the time that is initially used on other activities. _ 💬 歡迎留言跟我聊你的收穫 ⬇️ 喜歡這類分享他話記得開啟貼文通知 讓康妮的好文不漏接喔 ⬇️ #ielts #英文學習 #英語教學 #英文單字 #語言學習 #多益 #托福 #學測 #英文口說 #澳洲留學 #留學生 #留學生活 #雅思寫作 #打工度假 #學測英文 #生活英文 #康妮寫作 #英文寫作 #康妮日常英文 #英文作文